Choosing a Genre—Anatomy of a Best-Selling Story Part 7

Pick a door, any door, but make sure it’s the right door for you to write

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Screen Shot 2014-07-30 at 10.42.33 AMUnderstanding structure helps us write cleaner and faster. Whether we plan every detail ahead of time or just intuitively have the architecture in our head, structure makes the difference between a workable first draft and a nightmare beyond salvage.

I know a lot of you are chomping at the bit right now to get writing. All in due time. Today we are going to talk genre and why it is important to pick one.

Understanding what genre you are writing will help guide you when it comes to plotting your novel. How? Each genre has its own set of general rules and expectations. 

If we don’t pick or we get too weird, we will confuse agents and readers because there is no clear idea of where this sucker should be shelved. It will also make plotting more than problematic.

Fifteen years ago, when I first got this brilliant idea to…

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Is Your Story PRIMAL?—Anatomy of a Best-Selling Story Part 6

So easy a caveman could do it? Really?

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Geiko Caveman. Geiko Caveman.

Okay, so if you have read all the blogs in this series, you should understand what makes a scene vs. a sequel, understand the three-act dramatic structure. You also understand that the antagonist—or Big Boss Troublemaker—is the engine of your story. Without the BBT, your protagonist’s world would remain unchanged. The BBT’s agenda drives the story. It is the engine. No engine, no forward motion.

By this point, you should also be able to decipher a good idea from a not-so-good idea and then, once decided, state what your book is about in ONE sentence. You can have up to three, but let’s shoot for one.

Welcome to part SIX of my series on novel structure–whoo-hoo! Today we are going to discuss gimmick versus fundamentals of a good story.

First, gimmick. Here is the thing. There are only so many plots. DO NOT try to…

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Your Novel in ONE Sentence—Anatomy of Story Part 5

What’s your log line?

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I used to try to teach from the perspective of an editor, but I found that my thinking was flawed. Why? Because editors are like building inspectors. We have skills best used on a finished product. We are trained to look for problems. Is that a good skill? Sure. But do building inspectors design buildings? No. Architects do. Architects employ creativity and vision to create a final structure. Hopefully, they will have the necessary skills to create and design a structure that will meet code standards.

Creativity and vision are not enough. Architects need to learn mathematics and physics. They need to understand that a picture window might be real pretty, but if they put that sucker in a load-bearing wall, they won’t pass inspection and that they even risk a fatal collapse.

Aestheticism must align with pragmatism.

This made me step back and learn to become an architect. When…

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The Chosen – May’s book Selection: “The Sense of Style”

“The Sense of Style: The thinking persons guide to writing in the 21st century” by Steven Pinker is not your average writing advice book. In fact it really has nothing to do with a book writing either fiction or non-fiction. Instead it focuses on the art of using language correctly.

Pinker holds a doctorate in psychology in experimental psychology from Harvard University where he also taught for a long period. He also  specialized in  computational  learning theory as well as language acquisition. I am going to assume that this last area of interest is what led him to write this particular book. However, I have no data to support this theory. But, this particular book does focus on the use of language and in particular its focuses on archaic and obsolete rules of grammar that are best left behind as our language continues to evolve. And, our language does evolve. anyone who as read a text from the 1500s can clearly tell that we do not speak the same language as they did in Medieval Europe. And this research, and the knowledge gained from it, appears to be the basis for this particular book,  and it is why I have chosen it as the book of the month for May.

The first half of the book explains why certain grammar rules were created and how many of them were based on Latin forms of verb declension rules, as many other current grammar rules that also have Latin base connections. Such things as split infinities, never ending a sentence in a preposition, when to use you like and as, when to use whom or who, that or which, and so much more.

I will be the first to admit that the first half of the book is very dry. However, the first half of the book explains what the rule is and why it was important. The second half of the book which tells you why the rule is either obsolete or needs to be drastically modified was excellent. It includes clear examples of the rule in action and then a second example, of the same sentence, where the rule was either eliminated or modified. It is when you modify a rule or eliminate it completely that you create your own sense of style. However, and this is important, you must know the rules first in order to break them correctly later. If you do not: talking like Yoda, you will be.

Breaking grammar rules effectively and on occasion to make a certain point is part of creating your own writing style, or what they call your voice. However, I caution you to do this very sparingly. It is like adding pepper to a pot of stew, a little goes a long way. Add too much and it becomes inedible. In the same way, too many broken grammatical rules will make your work unreadable.

One final caveat, this book is definitely not for the grammar police or grammar Nazis. Or, any English teacher that may be set in their ways and is not open to new ideas.

It can be found on Amazon at: The Sense of Style

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Is Your Idea Strong Enough? Story Structure Part 4

L.O.C.K. and you will have a novel loaded for success!

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Whether we are traditionally published, indie published or self-published, we must connect with readers and tell a great story. Structure is the “delivery system” for our story, so it’s wise to make it as solid as possible.

Welcome to Part IV of my Structure Series—Testing the Idea

I assume that most of you reading this aspire to be great novelists. Novels are only one form of writing and, truth be told, they aren’t for everyone. Stringing together 60-100,000 words and keeping conflict on every page while delivering a story that makes sense on an intuitive level to the reader is no easy task.

That said, all novels begin with an idea. But how do we know if our idea has what it takes to make a great novel?

Many new writers start out with nothing more than a mental snippet, a flash of a scene or a nugget of an idea, and then…

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Anatomy of a Best-Selling Story 3—Opposition

Better get your ducks in a row folks, in other words make sure your primary antagonist is clear from the beginning

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Ah, structure. We are discussing the fundamentals of story. No skeleton and our story is a puddle of primordial adverb ooze. In Part One, we talked about the micro scale of fiction the scene and the sequel, cause and effect. In Part Two, we panned out for the BIG picture, Aristotelian Three-Act Structure.

Today? We talk about the essential ingredient for ALL fiction. Just like carbon is the ONE key ingredient for all LIFE, conflict is the key ingredient for ALL stories. No conflict? No story.

If you want to self-publish or indie publish, I would assume most of you want to be successfully published, regardless the format or distributor. To be considered “successfully published” we have to sell a lot of books. To sell a lot of books, we must connect with readers. That is what this series is about. Structure is how readers connect to stories. The…

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Happy Mother’s Day!!

Early Mother’s Day. I may have peed a little the first time I watched this.

Anatomy of a Best-Selling Story—Part Two

Kill the luck dragon, folks. Kill it dead!

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Last post, I started talking about the dreaded topic…structure. I write these posts because I really DO want you guys to succeed and as an editor for far too many years, the single biggest reason most new novels flop? Structure. Pretty prose does not a novel make. Each of these blogs will build upon the previous lesson. By the end of this series, I hope you to give you guys all the tools you need to be “structure experts.”

Yes, even the pantsers.

Structure is one of those topics that I feel gets overlooked far too much. There are a lot of workshops designed to teach new writers how to finish a novel in four weeks or three or two or whatever. And that is great…if a writer possesses a solid understanding of structure. If not? At the end of…

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COVER REVEAL: The Scarlet Deep (Elemental World Book Five)

Another new release from one of my favorite authors

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Goooooooood morning! Today, I’d like to unveil the pretty amazing cover that the lovely folks over at Damonza.com created for the next Elemental World novel, The Scarlet Deep. It’s the fifth book in the expanded series and the third full novel. The first full novel in over two years! Are you ready?

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So, I like it a little.

OKAY, I’M LYING. I LIKE IT A LOT.

Seriously though, here’s the synopsis:

On the waves of the North Atlantic, a poison spreads, sapping the life from humans and striking madness into immortals.

Patrick Murphy, the immortal leader of Dublin, has been trying to stem the tide of Elixir washing into his territory, but nothing seems to stop the vampire drug. While others in the immortal world work to cure the creeping insanity that Elixir threatens, Murphy has been invited to London to join a summit of leaders hoping to discover who…

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